Wednesday 30 May 2018


My name is Abedi. The first thing that I have to say is life is terrible. Every morning I have to wake up at half past three. Then I have to wake my siblings and they are stubborn. I have to make meiliepap ,but there bowels aren’t even half filled up. Then I get them dressed ,because they are to young to dress themselves. I walk to school Bear feet ,because we are too poor to afford it ourselves. My mom works at the sparzas. Unfortunately my dad died in the big flood trying to save his family. The time we got too school I smelt like poo and pee cause of the river the children call it The River of poo and pee. We have to cross there unfortunately there is no other way to cross it. The only thing that I look forward is my friends but the teachers are the meanest its like they don’t want you to get a good education. Today I was kicked out of class ,because I asked my friend what are you supposed to do. I got called back and smacked I sat down and did not speak again. At least we had a soccer practice,but today was a match. After the match I scored two goals the team was tired and we had to walk all the way back and that took five km to walk home.
When I got home my mom looked very happy ,because we got electricity from Stars. That night we had the best food I am pretty sure it was the best in the town it was so good I started crying with joy.

Wednesday 23 May 2018

Fantasy poem

There was once a creature called a Travam.
In the village called Pam.
It was hugemunges place bigger than one million.
It was a safe place.
Everybody worked at there ons pace.
They looked like vampires ,but.
There skin was as green as grass, there ears are as big as rabbit ears when they hear predators.
Thy had gigantic amount of water unlike the people in Cape Town.
They never fround in town.
They always groun at home.
If you get bit you turn into one.

Monday 14 May 2018

The singing inspector

When I heard it was singing I sighed and so did the hole class. So we went to the singing class and taking our time but the two boys stade behind cause they always had to wright test. He always wore very posh clothes. So we sang doh rah something like that ,but it was boring. Charles and I got called up first we looked at each other some how I new what he was thinking. I don’t know what to sing. Charles siad I can sing pretty poly embarrassed. So we sang Pretty Poly I sang with a high but soft voice and Charels sang with a low ,but quite voice. And then the singing inspeter scram waste of my time waste of two voiceless children in my singing class take them out! I thought in my mind you are a waste of my time.